Since writes a mirror columnist , a more or less antibajuwarische satire , reinzureiben Bayern inter alia their miserable German.
Yes, "their", not their.
Besides the fact that you describe the style of the lady as prosodically weak needs, their wit as forced, what still may be a matter of taste, respectively, missing since even a word that would have to stand there, it makes grammatical errors, confused "the" and "that" and their use of commas is a professional appalling. (You also do not know when one does not write great after colon.)
Could you perhaps been good, they would be allowed to visit a high school in pastures or Deggendorf, where the teachers had at least resorted to their time in the face of such weaknesses too sharp sanctions. (more ...)










